Score: 10

"Ahahaha, wonderful!"

submission: Starfire Hentai Parody

date: November 27, 2007

I really enjoyed this one. It really is your best work. I liked the changing shots near the ending, the angels used were great too. The most impressive thing I think is how well you made it fit together.
The credits were full of lulz too. :)

Score: 9

""Oh my goth." lol"

submission: Goth Lyfe 17: Daily Basis

date: November 3, 2007

Your getting pretty creative with this. The storylines pretty sweet. I'm excited to see where it goes. Keep up the awesome work man.
"I can't speak duck." lol

Score: 7

"Good artwork but animation needs work."

submission: The Halloween Party

date: October 24, 2007

The art was great. Mainly due to the shading. Try adding some more lighting effects. Just a simple low set yellow to white gradiat works great. Color bleeding is good effect too. Figure out the most common color of the scene/shot then cover the entire stage with it and set the alpha really low. (Like.. 7-15ish) Adds a great effect as it's easier on the eyes for viewers.
Your lip sync needs a lil' work. The size of the mouths aren't a problem at all. I could tell the audio was off a bit at times. Just try setting the audio to stream or changing the flash publish settings audio bit rate down to about 46-56 and quality to medium. It's rarely noticiable and works great. Add a few more mouths. All I saw was the standard opened, closed, and teeth mouth. No "O" mouth.
Eye movements and body movements durring lines are good too. The one characters eyes and brows didn't move at all. Which gave a stale effect.
Also: For your shots. You instantly had a close up. If you don't have a Vcam I highly reccomend it. If you do but are simply just cutting to a close up don't. Zoom in even if it's a 2 second zoom. It's easy on the guys and holds the same effect.

And finally... Rudy you dog. You say you hate mullet but both those dude had mini-mullets goin' on. :3
Keep up the good work man. Your lucky to be young. Ya got more time to practice. :P

Score: 10

"Pretty cool."

submission: Portal: The Flash Version

date: October 21, 2007

Simple controls, fun gameplay, great replay value, and challageing levels. Definately mimics the 3D one well. Overall just a great game. However I think the graphics for the player could've been better. Maybe some shading effects or something.

Score: 10

"Wonderful!"

submission: NG Sketchbook Tour 07

date: September 29, 2007

lol This turned out great. The fun facts and easter eggs were a nice touch. Once I get the money I'm so buyin' a shirt. I ain't never gonna forget this tour. The pic will for sure one day hunt me I know it. :P

Score: 10

"Haha, excellent!"

submission: Lemon Smash

date: September 4, 2007

Great gameplay, simple controls, and a nice style of graphics and choice of music. Their were no problems with it whatsoever. Everything fit perfect. I truly believe that this will become one of the classic games of NG. Faved and 5'd. Good job Duder. The Mullet-Man salutes you!

Score: 10

"lol Awesome."

submission: Blockhead: Episode 10

date: August 25, 2007

Always loved the animation in this. Even the lip sync is smooth.
Dob't worry too much about the preloader. I had fun makin' the beeb noise over and over. In fact I think I may have wroten' a masterpeice!

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Newgrounds BBS 2

date: August 25, 2007

Epic.
Keep it up. :P

Score: 8

"lol Poor Jim."

submission: Jim Day 07

date: August 23, 2007

I really like your series. You have an unique style to it and it's good to see your improving it.
My only problems are they're no voice overs for the characters. The VA club on NG can get you all the voices you need and heck ask me and I'll VA for ya too. (I VA alot in my toons. :P)
Anyway if your just avioding the Voices to aviod lip sync then just pull an illwillpress and just have them talk and move with know mouths.

Also: I'm looking forward to what evil jary will bring. ^^

Score: 7

"No hentai in this one?"

submission: This Is What You Want!

date: August 22, 2007

I'm disappointed... :(