Score: 9

"Brutally Entertaining."

submission: Rats on Cocaine - Ep # 9

date: May 18, 2008

Wonderful shots and I never get tired of the characters.
I'd like to see you take it to a higher level of insanity though.

Score: 8

"Hehe."

submission: Can we have sex?

date: May 18, 2008

That was cute. Your FBF is pretty good too though I think you can sneak in a bit more animation. Good choice of shots too. Try adding more detail in those close shots of the characters. Shading could also really improve your animations.

Score: 10

"ZOMG TITS!!!"

submission: Mastermind

date: January 29, 2008

I totally came! :P

I love the art style you used in this. The colors allwork so dang well and it's all so smooth. The changing angels were awesome too. I'd just like to see the Mastermind himself stand up a bit, I'm curious. :3

Also: I totally didn't just review this now cause I'm partying and it's funny how making tits the icon forced this up to #10(and rising). ^^

Score: 7

"Good artwork but animation needs work."

submission: The Halloween Party

date: October 24, 2007

The art was great. Mainly due to the shading. Try adding some more lighting effects. Just a simple low set yellow to white gradiat works great. Color bleeding is good effect too. Figure out the most common color of the scene/shot then cover the entire stage with it and set the alpha really low. (Like.. 7-15ish) Adds a great effect as it's easier on the eyes for viewers.
Your lip sync needs a lil' work. The size of the mouths aren't a problem at all. I could tell the audio was off a bit at times. Just try setting the audio to stream or changing the flash publish settings audio bit rate down to about 46-56 and quality to medium. It's rarely noticiable and works great. Add a few more mouths. All I saw was the standard opened, closed, and teeth mouth. No "O" mouth.
Eye movements and body movements durring lines are good too. The one characters eyes and brows didn't move at all. Which gave a stale effect.
Also: For your shots. You instantly had a close up. If you don't have a Vcam I highly reccomend it. If you do but are simply just cutting to a close up don't. Zoom in even if it's a 2 second zoom. It's easy on the guys and holds the same effect.

And finally... Rudy you dog. You say you hate mullet but both those dude had mini-mullets goin' on. :3
Keep up the good work man. Your lucky to be young. Ya got more time to practice. :P

Score: 10

"Haha, excellent!"

submission: Lemon Smash

date: September 4, 2007

Great gameplay, simple controls, and a nice style of graphics and choice of music. Their were no problems with it whatsoever. Everything fit perfect. I truly believe that this will become one of the classic games of NG. Faved and 5'd. Good job Duder. The Mullet-Man salutes you!

Score: 10

"lol"

submission: Newgrounds BBS 2

date: August 25, 2007

Epic.
Keep it up. :P

Score: 8

"lol Poor Jim."

submission: Jim Day 07

date: August 23, 2007

I really like your series. You have an unique style to it and it's good to see your improving it.
My only problems are they're no voice overs for the characters. The VA club on NG can get you all the voices you need and heck ask me and I'll VA for ya too. (I VA alot in my toons. :P)
Anyway if your just avioding the Voices to aviod lip sync then just pull an illwillpress and just have them talk and move with know mouths.

Also: I'm looking forward to what evil jary will bring. ^^

Score: 10

"An epic first flash."

submission: Happy clockday everybody

date: August 15, 2007

Very enjoyable. :)

Score: 10

"Everything fit perfectly."

submission: Machete

date: August 8, 2007

I love the unexpected appearence by TANKMEN and etc. The begining with the guy watching the hentai is my favorite part.

Score: 8

"Ya know what."

submission: Newgrounds Blamming

date: July 30, 2007

Despite it bein' short. You've really improved in flash. I remember your first submission. You definately will be winning an award in the future if you keep this up.
Maybe make a series or something. Storylines = goodness.